Change Your Life, Sister To Wife

Logline: A young man lost in a materialistic lifestyle remembers his family and is inspired to reconnect with the world by a mysterious woman.

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Synopsis

Rudi, a well-dressed young man, is seated at a large, round table at an upscale restaurant, looking tired and lost. Ambient noise of a raucous scene can be heard, and then fades. Cue music.

Rotate around the table to see Rudi's friends laughing, eating and drinking. Stop on a pretty blonde woman who pauses to answer her cell phone with an over-ear headset. Continue to pan around the table to the rest of the party, settling back on Rudi who forces a smile and enters the conversation.

The entourage barrels out the door into the night and turns down the lighted sidewalk, running past bars and clubs with Rudi in tow. A light rain begins to fall as they enter a coffee bar with a sign that says "The Bohemian."

Rudi picks up a glass of wine at the counter and turns to see Mimi standing nearby with a mug of coffee in her hands. They look at each other in surprise with big smiles. They instinctively walk up to each other and exchange a brief, emphatic greeting. Mimi motions Rudi to join her in a private booth.

They sit down and Rudi tries to charm her with some line, but she frowns. She gently, but directly begins to lecture him. Astonished, he looks down in apprehension. She pulls out a photograph and shows it to Rudi as she explains. Rudi looks at a happy portrait of his parents, him and Mimi, and rolls his eyes a bit. Then his expression changes to thoughtfulness and an acknowledgement of fond recollection. She implores him to keep it and hands it to him, and then leaves concerned and disappointed. He is left looking down at the table immersed in thought.

Rudi walks down the street in the morning with a crowd of professionally-dressed people on their way to work downtown. Many appear uncomfortable, disinterested, and labored. Some look snobby and rich. Rudi looks longingly at a fluorescent race yellow sports car, and then repentantly shakes his head.

At his cubicle in an office building, Rudi is concentrating intensely on a spreadsheet on his computer monitor. He loses focus, and turns to look at a framed picture on his desk.

Rudi confidently gives a presentation with projected slides in a conference room to a variety of mostly older and senior businesspeople. He fields questions and tries to answer them, but does so unsuccessfully.

Rudi rushes back to his cubicle to look at the family picture, but Mimi is no longer in it. In horror, Rudi rifles through his rolodex, then scrolls through his cell phone in vain. Rudi looks at the picture again, where he and his parents now wear neutral expressions. Shocked and desperate, Rudi quickly leaves the office. He rushes back to the coffee bar at dusk to look for Mimi to no avail.

At night, Rudi attends a formal corporate social event, but is alone. Determined and focused, he rushes out as one of his female friends looks disappointed to see him leave. He heads out the door, into the rain, down the street, chasing after a taxi. Rudi gets out of the cab in front of the coffee bar and rushes in.

He spots Mimi and smiles. She notices him but tries to ignore him. He puts his thick metal watch down on a table, where it is quickly pilfered. Rudi undoes his tie and drops it on the floor. He tries to speak with Mimi, but she rebuffs him and turns her attention back to her friends. He persists. Mimi finally engages him, and they start laughing and enjoying themselves.

Enthralled with each other, Rudi and Mimi leave the coffee bar holding hands loosely and running out into the rain together.

Rudi and Mimi are working in a shared office. Back out the door to reveal a placard that reads "Jack and Jill Charities."

A large group of festive people of all ages gather. They warmly, ecstatically and audibly interact with each other before posing for a camera. Pause to a still shot, closing in to frame an image of Rudi, Mimi, and parents.

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Cast (2)

Mimi / Supporting

Character Description
Soulful, starving artist. Looks a more ethnic than Jack. Attractive, with a natural, earthy look. Some inspiration from Renoir's "Lise The Bohemian."

Rudi / Lead

Character Description
Young urban professional, who is more of a poet at heart. Works hard, plays hard. An "everyman," but good looking.
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Griff

Piedmont, CA

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