Dimes
Regretting that he's only dated mediocre women all his life, Mike enlists the help of his best friend, a true ladies man, in order to land a dime: a perfect ten
Mike Jenkins, a 24 year old twitter employee, plans to propose to his longtime overweight girlfriend. He has always dated less than beautiful girls. Mike begins to have second thoughts about his girlfriend, Angelina, when he realizes how many incredible girls his best friend, Peter Park, has slept with.
Mike’s only goal is to be with a beautiful woman to see if he is missing out on anything.
Peter, a ladies man, convinces Mike that he can help him get back into the world of dating. Peter takes Mike on a journey from bars to porn conventions while teaching him the key aspects of approaching women.
When Angelina finds a speed dating card in Mike’s laundry, she hires a private who works for the show cheaters to follow him.
Mike’s only goal is to be with a beautiful woman to see if he is missing out on anything.
Peter, a ladies man, convinces Mike that he can help him get back into the world of dating. Peter takes Mike on a journey from bars to porn conventions while teaching him the key aspects of approaching women.
When Angelina finds a speed dating card in Mike’s laundry, she hires a private who works for the show cheaters to follow him.
Comments (7)
Jennifer Brigitte Please change Peter Park's name! You minus well call me Peter Parker!!! This story is contrived.
March 25, 2010Christopher Joseph Wow, this concept needs a lil something, something to get it going - were they at the wrong speed dating event?? All the transexuals and lesbians and gay men were more than the straight people which leads to some funny moments but it seems forced. This bit made Mike seem like a closted idiot and Peter - um Park? Like Peter Parker? Contrived. Not sure man, needs help - Angelina didn't show up let but I'm hoping she tosses this idiot down a staircase!
March 25, 2010Michelle Cutler ...and then what happens? You've got the first 10 minutes of a movie outlined and then let's root for Angelina. I also think the speed-dating scene was covered in 40-year old virgin. So what are we left with? You're scriptwriting is solid and that will take you far once you've developed your story further. Good job!
March 13, 2010Tat Zun i really enjoyed this!!
March 13, 2010Brian Lafferty Awesome!
March 10, 2010Rena Utley I loved it! Mad that it was only a snippet I wanted to read MORE!!
March 9, 2010Peter Kim haha excellent!
March 9, 2010