Election Day
She's the daughter of a conservative politician running for president. He's a liberal activist supporting the opposing candidate. Can love cross party lines?
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(Note: I have included two completely separate scene samples. The first few pages is a scene which is an integral part of the plot. The last 2 pages are one of the many scenes I've been toying with that samples characters/happenings Evan and Joe come across on their journey.)
Evan is a 20-something year old frustrated with his life and the world around him. He's unsure of what he wants to do with his life or where he's going. Part geek, part punk, the only thing Evan is sure of is that he's unhappy. He dreams of changing the world, but his days are spent working at a minimum wage job that he hates so he can (barely) pay the bills. His nights are spent hanging out with his off-the-wall yet genuine friends, getting drunk, and then going to work the next day and doing it all over again. However, this year is different from any other. This is an Election year.
Evan comes across a presidential candidate who's message of HOPE and CHANGE wins Evan over. Him and his friends join the local campaign to get the vote out for this presidential candidate. The stakes couldn't be any hire, as economic and social issues hang in the balance. Things won't be easy, as a popular conservative politician is running against their candidate. He's the enemy and stands for everything they're against.
The night before Election Day, Evan must be convinced by his friends to call it a night. Evan's best friend, a 'bro' named Joe urges Evan to come with them to a club - a way to let loose before the home stretch. Evan reluctantly agrees. At the club, Evan's friends drink and dance, but Evan can't get his mind off the day ahead. Sick of standing against the wall, he goes to the bar for one last drink before calling it a night. At the bar a beautiful blond preppy-type girl strikes up conversation with Evan. Evan's a bit taken back. He finds her stunning, but these type of girls normally don't give him the time of day. The two end up talking, drinking, and dancing for hours. As the night winds down, Evan finally musters up the courage to move in for a kiss. Unfortunately for him, before he could a fight breaks out in the club and Evan has to escort his drunken friend Joe from the club. Midst the chaos, Evan fails to exchange contact info with the girl.
Election Day. The day Evan's been waiting for, but he just can't stay focused. The girl from the night before is weighing heavy on his mind and he can't get over his inability to, once again, change the life he hates so much . He spends the day campaigning, but his friends can tell his mind is just not in it. At the end of the day, Joe invites Evan to the neighborhood bar & grill for a relaxing time to just hangout and watch the Election results on TV. Evan needs some convincing, but finally caves in. As the night goes on, the bar fills up. The streets outside begin to crowd. Joe and the rest of the crew revert to party mode, but Evan doesn't even look up from the bar. His drink remains untouched. He can't stop thinking about the girl from the night before and all of the "what-if's".
The Election results are in. Their candidate has won. The bar erupts, the crowds filling the street break out into celebration, Joe is giving high fives all around, but Evan is just too down in the dumps to celebrate. Suddenly, Evan looks up just as the conservative presidential hopeful is conceding at a rally on the other side of the city. Standing beside the politician is his daughter, the girl Evan met the night before. Evan exclaims the news to his friends, who are less then thrilled. However, Joe stands by Evan and urges him to embark on a journey to the enemy rally.
Half buddy comedy, half coming of age tale, Election Day follows the two friends as they journey through taxis, through buses and subways, and through crowded streets in an attempt to break from the norm on a night that's anything but. Along the way they meet a cast of interesting characters, whose lives were changed that night.
Can Evan find the CHANGE he so desperately seeks in his own life?
Evan is a 20-something year old frustrated with his life and the world around him. He's unsure of what he wants to do with his life or where he's going. Part geek, part punk, the only thing Evan is sure of is that he's unhappy. He dreams of changing the world, but his days are spent working at a minimum wage job that he hates so he can (barely) pay the bills. His nights are spent hanging out with his off-the-wall yet genuine friends, getting drunk, and then going to work the next day and doing it all over again. However, this year is different from any other. This is an Election year.
Evan comes across a presidential candidate who's message of HOPE and CHANGE wins Evan over. Him and his friends join the local campaign to get the vote out for this presidential candidate. The stakes couldn't be any hire, as economic and social issues hang in the balance. Things won't be easy, as a popular conservative politician is running against their candidate. He's the enemy and stands for everything they're against.
The night before Election Day, Evan must be convinced by his friends to call it a night. Evan's best friend, a 'bro' named Joe urges Evan to come with them to a club - a way to let loose before the home stretch. Evan reluctantly agrees. At the club, Evan's friends drink and dance, but Evan can't get his mind off the day ahead. Sick of standing against the wall, he goes to the bar for one last drink before calling it a night. At the bar a beautiful blond preppy-type girl strikes up conversation with Evan. Evan's a bit taken back. He finds her stunning, but these type of girls normally don't give him the time of day. The two end up talking, drinking, and dancing for hours. As the night winds down, Evan finally musters up the courage to move in for a kiss. Unfortunately for him, before he could a fight breaks out in the club and Evan has to escort his drunken friend Joe from the club. Midst the chaos, Evan fails to exchange contact info with the girl.
Election Day. The day Evan's been waiting for, but he just can't stay focused. The girl from the night before is weighing heavy on his mind and he can't get over his inability to, once again, change the life he hates so much . He spends the day campaigning, but his friends can tell his mind is just not in it. At the end of the day, Joe invites Evan to the neighborhood bar & grill for a relaxing time to just hangout and watch the Election results on TV. Evan needs some convincing, but finally caves in. As the night goes on, the bar fills up. The streets outside begin to crowd. Joe and the rest of the crew revert to party mode, but Evan doesn't even look up from the bar. His drink remains untouched. He can't stop thinking about the girl from the night before and all of the "what-if's".
The Election results are in. Their candidate has won. The bar erupts, the crowds filling the street break out into celebration, Joe is giving high fives all around, but Evan is just too down in the dumps to celebrate. Suddenly, Evan looks up just as the conservative presidential hopeful is conceding at a rally on the other side of the city. Standing beside the politician is his daughter, the girl Evan met the night before. Evan exclaims the news to his friends, who are less then thrilled. However, Joe stands by Evan and urges him to embark on a journey to the enemy rally.
Half buddy comedy, half coming of age tale, Election Day follows the two friends as they journey through taxis, through buses and subways, and through crowded streets in an attempt to break from the norm on a night that's anything but. Along the way they meet a cast of interesting characters, whose lives were changed that night.
Can Evan find the CHANGE he so desperately seeks in his own life?


Comments (15)
Erica H Good concept, I like the idea of it. But, reading the script, who in the world would find a homeless man being beaten by the police funny... and more importantly, how are we supposed to care about a main character if that's the case? I did enjoy the Star Wars references...
March 19, 2010I felt you should most definitely not have included the second scene as there was nothing funny (actually quite the opposite) about it in what is supposed to be a comedy script and you are supposed to be highlighting that fact.
Matt Binder The man, himself, is taking light of the whole situation as he smiles and gives a thumbs up to Joe's camera during the whole thing. The point is, these guys live in a big city, such as NYC where nothing surprises them or anyone else.
March 19, 2010J. Alex Boyd The concept seems like just another Romeo and Juliet white noise, but I had a lot of other problems with it:
March 12, 2010You got an issue with apostrophes. They are your friends and you keep abusing them like that. They just want to be loved. They want to be respected.
I really don't see what the drama is if the election is over. The republican candidate (A very obvious John McCain. Though this is permissible, because his daughter really is a looker) is no longer a problem, or "The enemy" if he's already lost. If the movie takes place DURING the election, well, that's something different. I just think it's a poor choice to have it take place afterwards.
I don't see any reason for the "ENTIRELY DIFFERENT SCENE". It isn't very funny, it isn't very interesting. It establishes that he's a bleeding heart, but we already assumed that. Why put it in?
I do like the star wars joke, though. I think it could be a little improved if you mention that, in fact, Luke DID want to "tap" that. But that's just my little advice. Take it or leave it.
Matt Binder Thanks for your comments, the only issue I had is with your third paragraph.
March 12, 2010I'm not trying to hide the fact that it's a "John McCain". The two presidential candidates are supposed to embody the two candidates of 2008. However, it's NOT the Election of 2008 in this fictional world.
However, if you think the two sides are no longer the "enemy" to the other, then you are mistaken. The health care issue rages on, Sarah Palin is still stirring people up at "tea parties", so to this group of friends the rally full of hardcore conservatives are still the enemy whether they won or not.
J. Alex Boyd But my point remains. Why NOT put it during the election? It would be so much more interesting and dramatic then, and the father might have motivation to disapprove of the romantic pairing. If you had a good reason for keeping it after the dems win, well, by all means, keep it that way. But I don't see that reason. You never make it clear. From what I see the better choice remains with the election still a possibility.
March 12, 2010Michelle Cutler The premise is strong - equating one's own personal need for change with the election. And the potential star-crossed lovers element is good too. But you get to it so late in the game. Why is your synopsis 2/3 set-up and the big reveal of the girl's identity at the end? I'd push everything forward and get going with that's interesting about the story.
March 12, 2010Good job!
Alan Binder Great idea, Matt. Can't wait to see you interviewed on The Daily Show and The Colbert Report after the flick is released!
March 12, 2010Jennifer Weitz I found the log line intriguing, the synopsis much too long, and the concept good. I found the dialogue to be stiff. Work on that along with exploring the characters and you might have something.
March 10, 2010Jacoub Marley I'm not sold on this concept. Let me guess, they find each other at the end and say something along the lines of "Fuck Politics" and then kiss. Roll credits.
March 9, 2010Matt Binder Well, that's always one way you can go with it. Big budget feature films continue to go with the obvious 'feel good' ending and it continues to work, I don't know why everyone on Massify has such a problem with it. Sometimes it's not the ending that matters, but the story that gets you there.
March 10, 2010But, no. This is not the direction I'm going in.
George Vasquez reminds me of tristan and isolde. isnt very original but that doesnt mean itll be bad. goodluck!
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The Bad Luck Gal! You have no luck! Sorry!
March 8, 2010William Stephens What?!
March 8, 2010