Type
Short Film
Genre
Drama

Half a Stop

When the daughters of a successful artist take nude pictures of themselves, they are met with controversy.

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kaibeverlywhittemore
Kai Beverly-Whittemore

Brooklyn, NY

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In a closet in a Brooklyn brownstone, Eloisa, 12 takes photos of her little sister, Maeve, 6, for a school project. What makes the photos unique is that Maeve is dressed up in fake blood, illustrating the final stages of the Bubonic Plague. She also happens to be topless.

The girls' productivity is interrupted by Cheryl, their photographer mom, who is downstairs furiously working towards the deadline of her next big show. On Maeve's behalf, Eloisa asks Cheryl if they can go to the zoo this weekend. Cheryl tells her she's far too swamped. Admiring the remnants of fake blood on Eloisa's face, Cheryl insists Eloisa lets her take a few pictures.

Cheryl takes more images of Eloisa and Maeve in the backyard. Cheryl's assistant and lover, Sisyphus, looks on. Eloisa asks Sisyphus if she can print the images for Maeve's school project, and Sisyphus assures her that she'll do it by morning.

In the morning, it becomes clear Sisyphus has not printed the images, but placed them on a disc. Eloisa furiously takes the disc to the computer lab at her hippie dippy school. When the librarian helps Eloisa with the unruly printer, she spies some of the images.

In Sex Ed class, Eloisa flirts with a boy who is excited about her mom's show. The headmaster calls Eloisa out of class. Cheryl is waiting for them in his office, exasperated to be taken away from her important work.

The headmaster explains the term 'sexting' to Cheryl, and produces the images from the computer lab. He says that if Eloisa had sent them to anyone she could be charged with child pornography.

Cheryl examines the images, stunned at how good they are. Eloisa is flattered by her mother's sudden interest in her work. Cheryl dismisses the headmaster's concern in a flurry. Eloisa remembers her sister and the intended reason for the images: Maeve's project on the Bubonic Plague. Eloisa finds Maeve lying on the floor of her classroom, sure Eloisa had forgotten her.

As the two girls walk home from school Cheryl pulls up alongside them and says she has a surprise.

At her gallery, she has already hung four of the images Eloisa took of Maeve. Eloisa sees that her mom has entitled them with her own name. Sisyphus suggests that Eloisa bargain with her mother for the images. If Eloisa could buy her own equipment, she wouldn't have to borrow Cheryl's. Instead, Eloisa approaches Cheryl and Maeve, telling Maeve that Cheryl has promised to let them skip school tomorrow so she can take them to the zoo. Aware that this is the bargaining chip Eloisa is offering in exchange for Cheryl's being able to call the photographs her own, Cheryl agrees.
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Desiree Akhavan This script took me to an incredibly fascinating, fully realized world of art and hippies. I loved the humor as well as the sad/scary truth of the manipulative adults and the children who have to adapt to their world.

May 21, 2009

Robert Whittemore The pitch, like the screenplay itself, provides the kind of tight sense of intention that entices as well as reassures the viewer/reader that this project will at once entrance and challenge. From characters who surprise us through language that is packed with their personal histories, to visuals that hone us in even as they play with our expectations, to the revelation of what is lurking in the intentional world in which these girls' eager lives are embedded, I am drawn in and yet unsettled. What a curious culture they are obliged to inhabit; we find ourselves implicated, even as we yearn that their wits and good sense will save us from our own foolish adult errands. What a delightful, thought provoking promise is here. Please make this: for the girls, and for us all!

May 21, 2009

Pierre Stefanos Hi Kai - LOL - so many kid scripts! :~) I like the complexity of your script and pitch, but kiddie porn - whoa...dangerous waters! The confrontation felt a bit 'Law & Order' but handled well enough. Good luck!

May 21, 2009

Janet Prince Interesting themes.

May 20, 2009

Hannah Claire I'm so proud of you and your big beautiful brain! This story sounds wonderful and new, I cannot wait to see it!

May 18, 2009

David Lobenstine Please please please make this film.

May 18, 2009

Fawzia Mirza love the concept, Kai. And even the way you've shared your story on here, really gives some great insight into the journey your imagination, perspective and creative eye can take an audience.

May 18, 2009

Mae Wolfe Yes, arty naked girl children are outsiders! Your screenplay is marvelously well-made. The tight structure gives you plenty of room to surprise and delight us all the way through. Strong, credible characters with real voices. Compelling visuals. Deft cultural critique. A quirky, wholly original take on the way children's productions (art, intentions) get appropriated by the adults in their lives. Smart and wicked and funny and a little bit sad.

May 18, 2009

Amelia MacRae Please make this film! It sounds beautiful and brilliant.

May 18, 2009

Jennifer Cayer amazing and impressive!

May 18, 2009
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