Hunter In Love
Two feuding ex-lovers are new co-owners of a hotel must work together to stave off an infestation of terrorists.
HUNTER (30), spy and playboy extraordinaire, has been able to talk his way out of any sticky situation...except for anything involving his sharpshooter, sharp tongued ex, DIANE (25).
When their mentor, JOE, died, he left them exactly one half of a remote hotel they both loved. Hunter finds himself in a no holds barred fight to Diane out, and he pulls every trick in the book...
Until the day terrorist take over the compound and hold guests hostage for ransom.
It was fine to call each other out, but he won't abide by punk outsiders who try to do the same. He and Diane become a team to roust the intruders, and is surprised to forge a rekindled romance.
After all, love's fair in war...
When their mentor, JOE, died, he left them exactly one half of a remote hotel they both loved. Hunter finds himself in a no holds barred fight to Diane out, and he pulls every trick in the book...
Until the day terrorist take over the compound and hold guests hostage for ransom.
It was fine to call each other out, but he won't abide by punk outsiders who try to do the same. He and Diane become a team to roust the intruders, and is surprised to forge a rekindled romance.
After all, love's fair in war...

Comments (5)
Lesa Babb Love the concept, the characters seem like they'd be fun to spend time with. I love the idea of these two having to put their battle of the sexes aside and team up to fight a greater threat. Nice twist at the end.
March 15, 2010Adite Banerjie Cool concept. The action-romantic comedy combination promises to be high on the fun quotient. Lots of potential for comedic conflict and tension.
March 12, 2010Jamie Davenport Great last line. Very funny pages. Kept me turning pages all the way. Great concept. Those two against terrorists. Should be a blast!
March 12, 2010Germaine de Pibrac James Love the snappy dialogue! I love the concept of the hotel-lots of comedic potential there-sort of The Money Pit only turned up ten notches and then throw in terrorists and I like the comedic language of "infestation" of terrorists.
March 11, 2010Lynn Dickinson Ha! Fun stuff. Very cool concept. I'm loving their relationship. Makes me eager to read more to see where it's going. Good luck in the contest!
March 10, 2010