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It's All a Masquerade - Don't Forget Sister
After wrecking his car a young rock star is haunted by memories of his sister and the whirlwind that led him to this point and decides to break free.
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A dramatic, suspenseful adventure film about some American Embassy kids who face life-threatening conditions when an African camping trip goes terribly wrong.
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ACT I
A dark winding road over-looking L.A. A car has skidded off the road and smashed into a pole. As the song begins we pull back to find our "HERO", dazed and confused, crumpled on the side of the road. He is "glammed out" in rock-star clothes and wears a strange masquerade-type mask. Intercut a quick tight shot of the drummer's hands keeping the rhythmic beat. As our hero sits, hand to his face, we see the sea of glittering city lights below. More tight shots of band for the first short instrumental break. No faces.
ACT II
We cut to an angelic young woman appearing in a brightly doorway of a dark bar watching our hero nurse a drink. He turns to look at her and we push right in to the eyehole of his mask to find him riding in the back of a limo surrounded by screaming fans. He hops out of the limo and disappears into the crowd, willfully autographing a barrage of CD covers shoved in his face. Through the mass of CD covers we dissolve into his sister's face literally mouthing the words "Don't Forget Sister". She stands in the window of a nice home. We slam into more shots of the band, now picking up the tempo. The shots are wider but they are silhouetted. We don't really know where the band is. We return to our protagonist as he floats through a party full of beautiful people wearing the same masks, in some posh residence over looking L.A. No one notices him, like he's a ghost. He could literally be floating perhaps on a dolly or something. This is a music video, so we can make it as fantastical as we want. He touches his face and finds blood. We now realize he's back in the present at the scene of the accident. Flashing red lights approach and then we find him asleep in some kind of jail cell. We move in close and dissolve again to a vision of his sister. He opens his eyes but she's not there. Back to the band, still in silhouette.
ACT III
We find our protagonist as he is led through a crowd of paparazzi peppering him with questions. He jumps in a limo and speeds away. It is at this point that he makes his decision. He rips off his mask, revealing his true self...it's Lucas behind that mask! I should point out that this is where the song goes from third person to first person sung by Lucas. He jumps out of the Limo and sprints off, ripping off his rock star clothes (well...maybe just his fur-lined coat and some jewelry). Cut to Lucas singing his heart out with the band, now fully lit in broad daylight as emotion builds, Back to our hero thumbing a ride. Back to the band. Back to Lucas running through a small town cemetery. We wonder...is his sister dead? But no, he keeps on running and ends up at a house. His sister comes out and they embrace. As they spin around we match dissolve to them as kids, big sister and little brother. The band, rejoicing with emotion, "woo-hoo!". The kids, running, chasing, even dancing to the music. We end with a big wide shot of the band playing full tilt to the end.
TONE
The video would go from dark, muted colors (except the blood), mostly claustrophobic shots, then progress to brighter, warmer, wide epic shots. This would be true of both the narrative and the band performance threaded through. I thought of David Lynch's "Mullholland Drive" in the beginning and "The Straight Story" in the end.
A FINAL NOTE
The most important thing to me is for the audience to feel something while watching, not get bogged down trying to follow the story. At first I considered having the sister dead at the end. I was heading that direction while storyboarding the protagonist running through the cemetery, but then I thought - what if he keeps on going instead and we find his sister isn't dead after all? It gives a nice twist I think. It's certainly open to interpretation but to me it's a song that starts dark and melancholy and progresses to joy and celebration and yes, a happy ending.
A dark winding road over-looking L.A. A car has skidded off the road and smashed into a pole. As the song begins we pull back to find our "HERO", dazed and confused, crumpled on the side of the road. He is "glammed out" in rock-star clothes and wears a strange masquerade-type mask. Intercut a quick tight shot of the drummer's hands keeping the rhythmic beat. As our hero sits, hand to his face, we see the sea of glittering city lights below. More tight shots of band for the first short instrumental break. No faces.
ACT II
We cut to an angelic young woman appearing in a brightly doorway of a dark bar watching our hero nurse a drink. He turns to look at her and we push right in to the eyehole of his mask to find him riding in the back of a limo surrounded by screaming fans. He hops out of the limo and disappears into the crowd, willfully autographing a barrage of CD covers shoved in his face. Through the mass of CD covers we dissolve into his sister's face literally mouthing the words "Don't Forget Sister". She stands in the window of a nice home. We slam into more shots of the band, now picking up the tempo. The shots are wider but they are silhouetted. We don't really know where the band is. We return to our protagonist as he floats through a party full of beautiful people wearing the same masks, in some posh residence over looking L.A. No one notices him, like he's a ghost. He could literally be floating perhaps on a dolly or something. This is a music video, so we can make it as fantastical as we want. He touches his face and finds blood. We now realize he's back in the present at the scene of the accident. Flashing red lights approach and then we find him asleep in some kind of jail cell. We move in close and dissolve again to a vision of his sister. He opens his eyes but she's not there. Back to the band, still in silhouette.
ACT III
We find our protagonist as he is led through a crowd of paparazzi peppering him with questions. He jumps in a limo and speeds away. It is at this point that he makes his decision. He rips off his mask, revealing his true self...it's Lucas behind that mask! I should point out that this is where the song goes from third person to first person sung by Lucas. He jumps out of the Limo and sprints off, ripping off his rock star clothes (well...maybe just his fur-lined coat and some jewelry). Cut to Lucas singing his heart out with the band, now fully lit in broad daylight as emotion builds, Back to our hero thumbing a ride. Back to the band. Back to Lucas running through a small town cemetery. We wonder...is his sister dead? But no, he keeps on running and ends up at a house. His sister comes out and they embrace. As they spin around we match dissolve to them as kids, big sister and little brother. The band, rejoicing with emotion, "woo-hoo!". The kids, running, chasing, even dancing to the music. We end with a big wide shot of the band playing full tilt to the end.
TONE
The video would go from dark, muted colors (except the blood), mostly claustrophobic shots, then progress to brighter, warmer, wide epic shots. This would be true of both the narrative and the band performance threaded through. I thought of David Lynch's "Mullholland Drive" in the beginning and "The Straight Story" in the end.
A FINAL NOTE
The most important thing to me is for the audience to feel something while watching, not get bogged down trying to follow the story. At first I considered having the sister dead at the end. I was heading that direction while storyboarding the protagonist running through the cemetery, but then I thought - what if he keeps on going instead and we find his sister isn't dead after all? It gives a nice twist I think. It's certainly open to interpretation but to me it's a song that starts dark and melancholy and progresses to joy and celebration and yes, a happy ending.


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September 2, 2011Miriam Reta Great concept, I am sure the audience will definitely feel something while watching, once its translated onto film.
October 23, 2008Karl Shefelman YES, GOOD LUCK TO EVERYONE! It's been quite a journey!
October 22, 2008Karl Shefelman Sorry, Paul, that's INGENUITY.
October 21, 2008Karl Shefelman Thanks Paul, I was very fascinated by the ingeniuity of
October 21, 2008your concept. Your pitch video was great, like a cosmologist
explaining "The Theory of Everything" on a blackboard.
Karl Shefelman Thanks, robinfrank! Yeah please check out the storyboards, video pitch, etc,
October 21, 2008The boards are very tightly synced to the song (start song about 3 secs into first frame. Thanks again for taking the time.
Robin O'Rourke this is great. a sureal portrati without too much involved. I have only been able to read the synopsis at the moment, but I like where you have gone with it. Reminds me a bit of the many Tom Petty videos I used to love.
October 21, 2008Paul Wallace cool pitch - I love the art - very visually compelling!
October 21, 2008Karl Shefelman Nice to hear, terrorinc!
October 20, 2008Karl Shefelman Thanks for the compliment. Daniel!
October 20, 2008